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		<title>&#8220;You can’t take an adult seriously when he’s debating you over why Twilight vampires are O.K. with sunlight.&#8221;</title>
		<link>http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/you-can%e2%80%99t-take-an-adult-seriously</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Apr 2012 13:00:20 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Celeste Ng</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[What to make of Joel Stein?  He&#8217;s a humor writer who (sometimes) makes serious points, and as a result, his readers sometimes miss the argument beneath the humor, or miss the humor on top of the argument.  His latest essay, &#8220;Adults Should Read Adult Books,&#8221; in the New York Times, is causing quite [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a title="Reading TWILIGHT on BART by peterme, on Flickr" href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/peterme/4906036086/"><img class="alignright" src="http://farm5.staticflickr.com/4123/4906036086_99764f84a2.jpg" alt="Reading TWILIGHT on BART" width="242" height="381" /></a>What to make of Joel Stein?  He&#8217;s a humor writer who (sometimes) makes serious points, and as a result, his readers sometimes miss the argument beneath the humor, or <a href="http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,1999416,00.html">miss the humor on top of the argument</a>.  His latest essay, &#8220;<a href="http://www.nytimes.com/roomfordebate/2012/03/28/the-power-of-young-adult-fiction/adults-should-read-adult-books">Adults Should Read Adult Books</a>,&#8221; in the New York Times, is causing quite a kerfuffle:</p>
<blockquote><p>I have no idea what “The Hunger Games” is like. Maybe there are complicated shades of good and evil in each character. Maybe there are Pynchonesque turns of phrase. Maybe it delves into issues of identity, self-justification and anomie that would make David Foster Wallace proud. I don’t know because it’s a book for kids. I’ll read “The Hunger Games” when I finish the previous 3,000 years of fiction written for adults.</p></blockquote>
<p>As you&#8217;d expect, the piece has generated hundreds of comments on the NYT website and Twitter, as well as longer-form responses elsewhere.  Here&#8217;s <a href="http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/booksblog/2012/mar/30/joel-stein-categorising-books-by-age">Alison Flood in <em>The Guardian</em></a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>In my view, there&#8217;s some truly amazing &#8220;young adult&#8221; writing out there that adults would be childish to overlook. There&#8217;s also some dreadful tripe. But, while holding my hand up as someone who has read Twilight and Harry Potter, and is avidly reading The Hunger Games right now, there&#8217;s tripe to be found among adult literature too.</p>
<p>And anyway, sometimes we need the bad stuff. Sometimes, Joel Stein, books aren&#8217;t for learning, because sometimes – for me, at least – they need to be the mental equivalent of a bar of Cadbury&#8217;s chocolate.</p></blockquote>
<p>Serious or not, Stein&#8217;s piece points at a trend we&#8217;ve seen more and more: adults reading books that are (ostensibly) for &#8220;young adults.&#8221;  So here&#8217;s a multiple-choice pop quiz: Is this an issue of (A) marketing?  (B) social immaturity?  (C) None of the above? (D) All of the above?</p>
<hr /><strong>Further Reading:</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>Some argue that young adult lit (YA) is actually <a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/does-ya-fiction-lead-to-dark-thoughts-or-do-dark-thoughts-lead-to-ya-fiction">TOO dark</a> for teens</li>
<li>The New York Times has tackled the <a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/how-old-is-too-old-for-ya">age &#8220;limits&#8221; of YA</a> before</li>
<li>Can YA tackle serious issues, like <a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/can-online-book-clubs-work">feminism</a> or <a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/is-there-space-for-gay-in-ya">sexuality</a>?  Many argue yes!</li>
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		<title>Robots Writing Novels?</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Feb 2012 13:00:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Celeste Ng</dc:creator>
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So a monkey typing into infinity will eventually produce Shakespeare&#8212;or so the theory goes.  Maybe robots would be faster?  
The New York Times recently discussed the phenomenon of robots writing books.  After an encounter with a robo-writer called Lambert M. Surhone&#8212;literally a computer churning out titles like &#8220;Saltine Cracker&#8221; and &#8220;Pagan Kennedy&#8221; [...]]]></description>
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<p>So a monkey typing into infinity will eventually produce Shakespeare&#8212;or so the <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Infinite_monkey_theorem">theory</a> goes.  Maybe robots would be faster?  </p>
<p>The <em>New York Times</em> recently discussed the phenomenon of <a href="http://www.nytimes.com/2011/10/16/books/review/do-androids-dream-of-electric-authors.html?_r=2&#038;ref=books&#038;pagewanted=all">robots writing books</a>.  After an encounter with a robo-writer called Lambert M. Surhone&#8212;literally a computer churning out titles like &#8220;<a href="http://www.amazon.co.uk/Saltine-Cracker-Lambert-M-Surhone/dp/6134466514/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&#038;ie=UTF8&#038;qid=1327869794&#038;sr=1-1">Saltine Cracker</a>&#8221; and &#8220;Pagan Kennedy&#8221; from pasted-together online text&#8212;author Pagan Kennedy (yes) was fascinated and preplexed:</p>
<blockquote><p>Could robots ever be trusted to write original novels, histories, scientific papers and sonnets? For years, artificial-intelligence experts have insisted that machines can succeed as authors. But would we humans ever want to read the robot-books?</p></blockquote>
<p>Mechanized storytelling is hardly a new idea for the internet age.  The blog <a href="http://www.brainpickings.org/index.php/2012/01/06/plotto">Brain Pickings explains</a> that nearly a century ago, people were already trying to mechanize the art of narration:</p>
<blockquote><p>In 1894, French critic Georges Polti recognized thirty-six possible plots, which included conflicts such as Supplication, Pursuit, Self-sacrifice, Adultery, Revolt, the Enigma, Abduction, and Disaster. In 1928, dime novelist William Wallace Cook, author of <em>Plotto: The Master Book of All Plots,</em> did him one better, cataloging every narrative he could think of through a method that bordered on madness. His final plot count? 1,462.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.tinhouse.com/books/non-fiction/plotto.html"><img alt="" src="http://www.tinhouse.com/media/catalog/product/cache/1/image/224x255/9df78eab33525d08d6e5fb8d27136e95/b/k/bk-plto-pg_2.jpg" title="Plotto" class="alignright" width="224" height="255" /></a>Plotto, reissued last month by Tin House, was a manual that aimed to mechanize the entire narrative trade. In his introduction, Paul Collins recognizes that Cook was something of a plot machine himself, once writing fifty-four novels in a year, more than one a week. Cook’s methods were developed into a Plotto Studio of Authorship in New York City, his book hailed as “an invention which reduces literature to an exact science.”</p>
<p>While still a young director in England, Alfred Hitchcock requested the book from America, and the creator of the courtroom drama Perry Mason claimed he had learned a great deal from it. </p></blockquote>
<p>Here&#8217;s a sample entry from <a href="http://www.tinhouse.com/books/non-fiction/plotto.html">Plotto</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>9b. B’s cattle ranch was left to her by her father, and every man B hires as foreman makes love to her sooner or later, and is discharged. B hires A as a foreman on her ranch, and he promises to keep his place and not to make love to her, but B falls in love with him, and it present glad to learn that A’s sole purpose in taking the job of foreman was to win her love.”</p></blockquote>
<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/skarmj/18393568/" title="IMG_0802 by s m johnson, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm1.staticflickr.com/12/18393568_049821ee57_m.jpg" width="240" height="160" alt="IMG_0802" class="alignleft"></a>Like Lambert Surhone, Plotto and the other story-writing machines may seem mindless and formulaic.  But in the Chronicle of Higher Education, <a href="http://chronicle.com/article/Uncreative-Writing/128908/">Kenneth Goldsmith argues</a> the opposite may be true.  He teaches a class at at the University of Pennsylvania called &#8220;Uncreative Writing,&#8221; in which students &#8220;are rewarded for plagiarism, identity theft, repurposing papers, patchwriting, sampling, plundering, and stealing&#8221;&#8212;just the kind of work Lambert Surhone does.  Goldsmith readily acknowledges the pitfalls of this kind of writing, but done properly, he suggests, it might help revitalize literature:</p>
<blockquote><p>I&#8217;m not saying that such writing should be discarded: Who hasn&#8217;t been moved by a great memoir? But I&#8217;m sensing that literature—infinite in its potential of ranges and expressions—is in a rut, tending to hit the same note again and again, confining itself to the narrowest of spectrums, resulting in a practice that has fallen out of step and is unable to take part in arguably the most vital and exciting cultural discourses of our time. I find this to be a profoundly sad moment—and a great lost opportunity for literary creativity to revitalize itself in ways it hasn&#8217;t imagined. [...]</p>
<p>After a semester of my forcibly suppressing a student&#8217;s &#8220;creativity&#8221; by making her plagiarize and transcribe, she will tell me how disappointed she was because, in fact, what we had accomplished was not uncreative at all; by not being &#8220;creative,&#8221; she had produced the most creative body of work in her life. By taking an opposite approach to creativity—the most trite, overused, and ill-defined concept in a writer&#8217;s training—she had emerged renewed and rejuvenated, on fire and in love again with writing.</p></blockquote>
<p>Goldsmith&#8217;s essay is fascinating and well worth a read in <a href="http://chronicle.com/article/Uncreative-Writing/128908/">its entirety</a>.  And tell us: What do you make of robot writing?  If humans create literature by &#8220;repurposing papers, patchwriting, sampling, plundering, and stealing,&#8221; are they any different from robot &#8220;writers&#8221; like Lambert Surhone?  Or are they, as Goldsmith suggests, possibly the way of the future?</p>
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<strong>Further Reading:</strong></p>
<ul>
<li><a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/fiction-from-the-spam-box">Repurposing spam</a> as poems&#8212;or fiction.</li>
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		<title>Fahrenheit 451&#8211;2011 edition?</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Nov 2011 13:00:27 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Celeste Ng</dc:creator>
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Is there anything more disrespectful to a book&#8211;and its authors and would-be readers&#8211;than burning?  Book burnings are inevitably associated with censorship and repressive ideology, from the Third Reich to the more recent Quran-burning controversy.  Even without those connotations, burning any book&#8211;for any reason&#8211;sends a shiver down my spine.
But can book-burning sometimes be justified? [...]]]></description>
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<p>Is there anything more disrespectful to a book&#8211;and its authors and would-be readers&#8211;than burning?  Book burnings are inevitably associated with censorship and repressive ideology, from the <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nazi_book_burnings">Third Reich</a> to the more recent <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2010_Qur%27an-burning_controversy">Quran-burning controversy</a>.  Even without those connotations, burning any book&#8211;for any reason&#8211;sends a shiver down my spine.</p>
<p>But can book-burning sometimes be justified?  On Cracked, <a href="http://www.cracked.com/article_19453_6-reasons-were-in-another-book-burning-period-in-history.html">S. Peter Davis writes about book-burnings</a> that are occurring now, all over many countries&#8211;and why:</p>
<blockquote><p>For the past year or so, part of my job has been to walk through library warehouses and destroy tens of thousands of often old and irreplaceable books. [...]</p>
<p>Industrial-scale book destruction is going on at the British Library, possibly the most prestigious library in the world (you can tell because it&#8217;s British). Recent book-pulping scandals have hit the University of New South Wales in Australia, as well as several other institutions. Hell, when Borders bookstores went belly-up earlier this year, they decided to destroy all the unsold books instead of donate them.</p>
<p>And no, I&#8217;m not just talking about duplicates and old TV Guides, either. Imagine holding a beautiful, dusty, illustrated volume of Shakespeare printed in the 1700s, a calligraphic message from its long-dead owner inscribed on the inside cover, and throwing it straight in the trash. I&#8217;ve been there, more than once. I could have kept it and maybe gotten a few hundred dollars for it on eBay, if my supervisor wasn&#8217;t watching with specific orders to prevent me from doing that.</p></blockquote>
<p>Before you write Davis any hate mail, read his <a href="http://www.cracked.com/article_19453_6-reasons-were-in-another-book-burning-period-in-history.html">entire piece</a>. He offers six reasons these book-burnings occur, including &#8220;It&#8217;s cheaper than giving them away,&#8221; &#8220;Libraries can&#8217;t grow fast enough,&#8221; and yup, you guessed it, &#8220;The books are going digital.&#8221;  In the end, Davis concludes that these book-burnings are inevitable in today&#8217;s world.</p>
<p>What do you think?  Are book-burnings like this evil?  A necessary evil?  Or just&#8230; necessary?</p>
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		<title>Is there space for &#8220;GAY&#8221; in &#8220;YA&#8221;?</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Oct 2011 13:00:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Celeste Ng</dc:creator>
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What if an agent agreed to represent your book&#8211;IF you changed the main character from gay to straight?  
That&#8217;s what happened to writers Sherwood Smith and Rachel Manija Brown and their YA novel, Stranger, according to a post they wrote in Publisher&#8217;s Weekly:
Our novel, Stranger, has five viewpoint characters; one, Yuki Nakamura, is gay [...]]]></description>
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<p>What if an agent agreed to represent your book&#8211;IF you changed the main character from gay to straight?  </p>
<p>That&#8217;s what happened to writers Sherwood Smith and Rachel Manija Brown and their YA novel, <em>Stranger</em>, according to a post they wrote in <a href="http://blogs.publishersweekly.com/blogs/genreville/?p=1519">Publisher&#8217;s Weekly</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>Our novel, Stranger, has five viewpoint characters; one, Yuki Nakamura, is gay and has a boyfriend. Yuki’s romance, like the heterosexual ones in the novel, involves nothing more explicit than kissing.</p>
<p>An agent from a major agency, one which represents a bestselling YA novel in the same genre as ours, called us.</p>
<p>The agent offered to sign us on the condition that we make the gay character straight, or else remove his viewpoint and all references to his sexual orientation.</p></blockquote>
<p>Now, here&#8217;s where things get sticky.  Smith and Brown explicitly refused to name the agent in question in order to focus attention on the larger problem: the difficulty of publishing a YA novel with LGBT characters.  Yet a few days later, the agent was &#8220;outed&#8221; in an angry rebuttal that accused the authors of misrepresenting the situation.  And then things got really messy.  Occupation Girl has <a href="http://cleolinda.livejournal.com/993710.html">an excellent summary of the whole situation</a>, including rebuttals to the rebuttal and evidence about whether there&#8217;s support for LGBT novels in the world of YA.  <a href="http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2011/sep/14/ya-authors-gay-characters"><em>The Guardian</em> reports</a> on similar cases, including one where an editor simply deleted all gay references without telling the author.  </p>
<p>Why does all this matter?  I think <a href="http://blogs.publishersweekly.com/blogs/genreville/?p=1519">Smith and Brown (and many other authors) got it right in their original post</a>&#8211;this is part of a bigger issue:</p>
<blockquote><p>Rachel replied, “Making a gay character straight is a line in the sand which I will not cross. That is a moral issue. I work with teenagers, and some of them are gay. They never get to read fantasy novels where people like them are the heroes, and that’s not right.”</p>
<p>The agent suggested that perhaps, if the book was very popular and sequels were demanded, Yuki could be revealed to be gay in later books, when readers were already invested in the series.</p>
<p>We knew this was a pie-in-the-sky offer—who knew if there would even be sequels?—and didn’t solve the moral issue. When you refuse to allow major characters in YA novels to be gay, you are telling gay teenagers that they are so utterly horrible that people like them can’t even be allowed to exist in fiction.</p></blockquote>
<p>And this <a href="http://www.themillions.com/2011/08/making-room-for-readers.html">wonderful essay</a> from The Millions, by Steve Himmer, offers a powerful argument for letting young readers read what they choose:</p>
<blockquote><p>Thirteen is a liminal moment between childhood and adulthood, so who am I to say what’s appropriate for someone that age, and for this particular thirteen year old I don’t know in the slightest. And let’s face it, there are probably lots of parents who’d worry about their son or daughter (or nephew or niece) buying a novel about a hermit who spends most of his story naked from a scruffy guy like me. That’s easy enough for me to accept. As my protagonist says, “if I saw myself bursting out of the woods, I might not offer help either.”</p>
<p>Yet I can’t help but remember that reading — both the careful selection of books and being given enough privacy to quietly read them myself — was among the first freedoms I had. Those early choices, and being trusted to make them, seem like foundational experiences now, decades later. [...]</p></blockquote>
<p>This isn&#8217;t just about marketability, or literature.  It&#8217;s about affirming&#8211;or denying&#8211;the lives that many teens are already living. </p>
<p><strong>Further reading:</strong></p>
<ul>
<li><a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/does-ya-fiction-lead-to-dark-thoughts-or-do-dark-thoughts-lead-to-ya-fiction">Does YA help teens with dark thoughts?</a></li>
<li>After <a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/bitchin-good-list">some controversy over what counts as &#8220;feminist YA lit,&#8221;</a> BITCH magazine tries to start an <a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/can-online-book-clubs-work">online feminist YA book club</a></li>
<li><a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/ya-authors-fight-bullying">YA authors team up to fight bullying</a></li>
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		<title>What Makes Gatsby Great</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 13:00:46 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>J.T. Bushnell</dc:creator>
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When I heard The Great Gatsby had been rewritten for intermediate readers, I did what many lovers of the novel probably did—checked the online version to see how my favorite passage had been changed, shook my fist, and then re-read the original, penciling all kinds of ecstatic remarks into the margins.
In case you missed Celeste’s [...]]]></description>
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<p>When I heard <em>The Great Gatsby</em> had been rewritten for intermediate readers, I did what many lovers of the novel probably did—checked the online version to see how my favorite passage had been changed, shook my fist, and then re-read <a href="http://ebooks.adelaide.edu.au/f/fitzgerald/f_scott/gatsby/">the original</a>, penciling all kinds of ecstatic remarks into the margins.</p>
<p>In case you missed <a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/blog/the-less-great-gatsby">Celeste’s post</a>, Macmillan has released a simplified version of the novel as “retold by Margaret Tarner.” Essentially, it relates the events of the Gatsby story without all the big words and elaboration.</p>
<p>And so my favorite passage, two beautiful paragraphs of imagery and movement and metaphor, becomes one plain, plodding sentence: <em>Wind blew through the room until Tom closed the window</em>. Or something like that. I can’t double-check, because Macmillan yanked the content from the web shortly after Roger Ebert attacked it in <a href="http://rogerebert.suntimes.com/apps/pbcs.dll/article?AID=/19740101/REVIEWS/401010315/1023">this diatribe.</a></p>
<p>But compare that sentence to Fitzgerald’s original:</p>
<blockquote><p>We walked through a high hallway into a bright rosy-colored space, fragilely bound into the house by French windows at either end. The windows were ajar and gleaming white against the fresh grass outside that seemed to grow a little way into the house. A breeze blew through the room, blew curtains in at one end and out the other like pale flags, twisting them up toward the frosted wedding-cake of the ceiling, and then rippled over the wine-colored rug, making a shadow on it as wind does on the sea.</p>
<p>The only completely stationary object in the room was an enormous couch on which two young women were buoyed up as though upon an anchored balloon. They were both in white, and their dresses were rippling and fluttering as if they had just been blown back in after a short flight around the house. I must have stood for a few moments listening to the whip and snap of the curtains and the groan of a picture on the wall. Then there was a boom as Tom Buchanan shut the rear windows and the caught wind died out about the room, and the curtains and the rugs and the two young women ballooned slowly to the floor.</p></blockquote>
<p>Infinitely better, isn’t it? But why? What good does all that extra writing do?</p>
<p>First, it gives us a sensory experience rather than merely conveying information. That is, we get to witness this wind for ourselves. We see it in the wild movements of loose fabric, hear its flutters and snaps and groans, feel the buoying and ballooning sensations.</p>
<p><a href="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/the-great-gatsby.jpg"><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-13576" title="the-great-gatsby" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/the-great-gatsby.jpg" alt="the-great-gatsby" width="166" height="250" /></a>Second, the imagery in the scene parallels the action of the novel. One of these women is Daisy, who for five years has lived in Gatsby’s fantasies, built up by his romantic imagination into something like the figure presented here—one of impossible lightness and freshness and freedom. This is the first we’ve seen of her, and immediately Fitzgerald aligns our perception with Gatsby’s. Notice the openness, the movement, the elevation, the whiteness. It is, of course, Tom Buchanan who ultimately puts an end to Gatsby’s vision, just as he puts an end to the breeze here, bringing everybody back down to earth.</p>
<p>Third, the precise, vivid, metaphorical language launches the novel’s emotional arc. The room is “bright” and “rosy-colored” and “fragilely bound into the house,” sharp descriptions that further echo Gatsby’s vision of Daisy. There is also, however, a “wedding-cake” ceiling, which captures that frosted texture perfectly, but complicates Gatsby’s vision, too—she is, after all, married. Ah, but the “wine-colored rug” suggests class, extravagance, inebriation, and even—because of Prohibition—illicit behavior, all of which play roles in Gatsby’s attempt to seduce her. The paragraph ends as the novel does, with a note of insubstantiality and transience, the curtain “making a shadow on it as wind does on the sea.”</p>
<p>Now, this is only page eight. At this point, readers haven’t been introduced to Gatsby’s dreams and disappointments, so on first read, they will have no inkling of what is being developed here. Even on subsequent reads, its exact nature may elude them. But that doesn’t mean it has no effect. These things build and resonate even when readers aren’t aware of them. That’s why stories so often leave us with an emotional detonation we don’t fully understand. It’s why stories can move us even when we can’t explain why we are moved.</p>
<p>And that’s what gives stories their value—they’re aimed at our hearts, not our heads. Understanding that there is a wind isn’t the same as experiencing it. As <a href="http://www.powells.com/biblio/7-9780374508043-2">Flannery O’Connor puts it</a>,</p>
<blockquote><p>A story is a way to say something that can’t be said any other way, and it takes every word in the story to say what the meaning is. [. . .] When anybody asks what a story is about, the only proper thing is to tell him to read the story. The meaning of fiction is not abstract meaning but experienced meaning.</p></blockquote>
<p>That is, you can’t tell the same story with different words. When you change the words, you change the experience and thereby change the story.</p>
<p><img alt="" src="http://www.coverbrowser.com/image/books-about-love/221-9.jpg" title="What We Talk About cover" class="alignright" width="179" height="283" />I think most readers understand this intuitively, and that’s why so many of us are put off by Tarner’s rewrite. It’s also why so many have decried the new version of <em>Huckleberry Finn</em> in which the N-word has been removed. And it’s why so many Raymond Carver fans were upset when Tess Gallagher, Carver’s widow, <a href="http://www.newyorker.com/fiction/features/2007/12/24/071224fi_fiction_carver">republished</a> unedited versions of the stories in <em>What We Talk About When We Talk About Love</em>.</p>
<p>It might also be the reason Tarner’s ending seems so different from Fitzgerald’s:</p>
<blockquote><p>Gatsby had believed in his dream. He had followed it and nearly made it come true.</p>
<p>Everybody has a dream. And, like Gatsby, we must all follow our dream wherever it takes us.</p>
<p>Some unpleasant people became part of Gatsby’s dream. But he cannot be blamed for that. Gatsby was a success, in the end, wasn’t he?</p></blockquote>
<p>In the original, Gatsby ends up rejected by the woman he loves, hollowed out by the failure of his dream, murdered in his swimming pool, and abandoned by nearly everyone before his funeral. It’s difficult to call that a success. But Tarner has changed the words, and so we must assume she is ending a different story.</p>
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<p>Ebert, whose column brought such notoriety to Tarner’s retelling, seems to recognize this dynamic, but he overshoots his mark. He argues that “Fitzgerald’s novel is not about a story. It is about <em>how the story is told.</em>” That’s approximately correct. He means, I think, that the writing is as important as the story, which is true. But to say that <em>Gatsby</em> isn’t about a story—well, that only reduces it, the same way Tarner does.</p>
<p>The problem is the idea that one of these elements is secondary to the other. Tarner’s rewrite indicates that the sequence of events matters, not the language; Ebert contends the language matters, not the events. Perhaps the more basic problem is the idea that these elements are divisible in the first place, as if one can exist without the other. They aren’t; they can’t. To Ebert, I would say that the language builds the story. To Tarner, I would say the same.</p>
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		<title>&#8220;She is not a complete master of a house, so that comes over in her writing, too.&#8221;</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Aug 2011 13:00:03 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Celeste Ng</dc:creator>
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You have probably heard by now that V. S. Naipaul issued a broad-handed diss to women writers, claiming no female writer could be his equal:
He felt that women writers were &#8220;quite different&#8221;. He said: &#8220;I read a piece of writing and within a paragraph or two I know whether it is by a woman or [...]]]></description>
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<p>You have probably heard by now that V. S. Naipaul issued a <a href="http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2011/jun/02/vs-naipaul-jane-austen-women-writers">broad-handed diss to women writers</a>, claiming no female writer could be his equal:</p>
<blockquote><p>He felt that women writers were &#8220;quite different&#8221;. He said: &#8220;I read a piece of writing and within a paragraph or two I know whether it is by a woman or not. I think [it is] unequal to me.&#8221;</p>
<p>The author, who was born in Trinidad, said this was because of women&#8217;s &#8220;sentimentality, the narrow view of the world&#8221;. &#8220;And inevitably for a woman, she is not a complete master of a house, so that comes over in her writing too,&#8221; he said.</p>
<p>He added: &#8220;My publisher, who was so good as a taster and editor, when she became a writer, lo and behold, it was all this feminine tosh. I don&#8217;t mean this in any unkind way.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p>In response, the <em>Guardian</em> puts Naipaul (and you) to the test with a <a href="http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/quiz/2011/jun/02/naipaul-test-author-s-sex-quiz?CMP=twt_fd">10-question quiz</a>.  For example, can you tell whether this passage is by a man or a woman?</p>
<blockquote><p>“A tall, broad-shouldered man came to stand in the doorway, dressed in faded jeans and an untucked tan chamois shirt, his feet shod in moccasins. Maggie could hardly take him in. Brown curly hair, a light stubble of beard, piercing green eyes framed by laugh wrinkles. Cookie halfway to her mouth and uncharacteristically breathless, she admonished herself, Get a grip. He&#8217;s just another man…”</p></blockquote>
<p>Take the quiz, if only for the quips it displays when revealing your score.  (No, I&#8217;m not telling.)</p>
<p>Meanwhile, the <em>L.A. Times</em> <a href="http://latimesblogs.latimes.com/jacketcopy/2011/05/book-covers-revisited-mr-dalloway.html">highlights</a> a German artist who switches the genders on book covers, shaking up our gender expectations with titles like  <em>A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Woman</em>, <em>Mr. Dalloway</em>, and <em>Woman and Superwoman</em>.  Visit the Times&#8217;s site for pictures of her work, including covers.  I wonder what Naipaul would think about <em>Dona Quixote</em>?</p>
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		<title>How to save a library?  With postcards&#8211;and some attitude.</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jul 2011 13:00:40 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>Last summer, I worked a few blocks away from the regal main branch of the New York Public Library near Bryant Park. During the interlude between the end of the work day and the start of a class I was taking, I’d sometimes take refuge in the humbling building, its architectural beauty and breathtaking murals never ceasing to amaze me. So when I came across <a href="http://blogs.villagevoice.com/runninscared/2011/06/kid_writes_awes.php">the story of a young girl aiming to keep the city’s libraries open by writing comical postcards</a> to New York City Mayor Michael Bloomberg, I was not only amused but also grateful that someone else, too, couldn’t imagine New York without its famed literary landmark.</p>
<p>The tween, called “Tara” by New York City public librarian and <a href="http://www.screwydecimal.com/">&#8220;Screwy Decimal&#8221;</a> blogger Rita Meade, drafted a series of postcards with creative threats to Mayor Bloomberg when funding for the city’s public libraries was in jeopardy late last month.</p>
<p>Here’s one of them:</p>
<div class="wp-caption aligncenter" style="width: 360px"><img title="Tara postcard 1" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-G5pRlMypVwo/TfmGXxrm0RI/AAAAAAAAASE/XI4PSUDfUpo/s1600/postcard1.jpg" alt="via ScrewyDecimal" width="350" height="271" /><p class="wp-caption-text">via ScrewyDecimal</p></div>
<p><a href="http://blogs.villagevoice.com/runninscared/2011/06/kid_writes_awes.php">Explains the Village Voice:</a></p>
<blockquote><p>Councilman Jimmy Van Bramer of Sunnyside, Queens, initiated a postcard campaign to express to Mayor Bloomberg how important it is that the libraries continue to receive full funding. Librarians and library supporters had people fill out and collected the postcards.</p></blockquote>
<p>And while Tara’s intimidations <em>might </em>have been cause for concern if they hadn’t come from a ten-year-old girl, the motive behind them was simply a love for books and the city’s public libraries. So I’m sure Mayor Bloomberg wasn’t alarmed once he realized this most innocent of intentions.</p>
<p>On her blog, <a href="http://www.screwydecimal.com/2011/06/postcards-from-edge-of-reference-desk.html">Meade chronicled</a> several of Tara’s postcards. In another postcard draft, Tara wrote that she would organize a school protest:</p>
<div class="wp-caption aligncenter" style="width: 360px"><img title="Tara postcard 2" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-VevM42KKVo4/TfmGc7DSteI/AAAAAAAAASI/DpE0PXuM3HE/s320/postcard2.jpg" alt="Image via Screwy Decimal" width="350" height="276" /><p class="wp-caption-text">Image via Screwy Decimal</p></div>
<p>Meade encouraged Tara to try again:</p>
<blockquote><p>Well, I thought the idea of a school protest was wonderful, so I was completely in Tara&#8217;s corner until the ‘six feet under’ comment. (Which was followed by maniacal laughter on Tara&#8217;s part, by the way.) Since she had escalated her message from a vague threat to more of a thinly-veiled threat, Tara scrapped that postcard and filled out yet another one.</p></blockquote>
<p>After yet another draft that included Tara writing that she “will scream [her] bloody head off and put it on a golden platter” if the library system’s budget is reduced, Tara and Meade settled on a final postcard:</p>
<div class="wp-caption aligncenter" style="width: 360px"><img title="Tara postcard 3" src="http://blogs.villagevoice.com/runninscared/assets_c/2011/06/postcard4-thumb-320x247.jpg" alt="Image via Screwy Decimal" width="350" height="270" /><p class="wp-caption-text">Image via Screwy Decimal</p></div>
<p>Lucky for Tara and other public library lovers, the New York Public Library system, which was facing a $40 million funding reduction, <a href="http://blogs.villagevoice.com/runninscared/2011/06/new_york_public.php">ultimately was not put on the chopping block</a>. But even after hearing the good news, Tara wasn’t ready to give Mayor Bloomberg a break just yet. After learning her library branch would remain open, <a href="http://blogs.villagevoice.com/runninscared/2011/07/little_girl_bugget_cuts_nypl_bloomberg.php">Tara said</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>“Bring it ON! Let&#8217;s see this mayor. If he comes here, I&#8217;m gonna give him a piece of my mind.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p>Meade added:</p>
<blockquote><p>“I couldn&#8217;t help but laugh, even as I explained that the Mayor and City Council voted to restore most of the library&#8217;s funding. (Although, truth be told, I wouldn&#8217;t mind someone giving the Mayor a piece of his/her mind for doing this ridiculous budget game every year.)</p></blockquote>
<p>Thank you, Tara, for defending the New York Public Library, your humor, and your steadfast desire to keep reading. The next time I’m in New York walking up those magnificent marble steps, I’ll think of your postcards, laugh quietly to myself I’m sure, and have a new appreciation for the city’s literary gem.</p>
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		<title>How far can book promotions go?</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jul 2011 13:00:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Celeste Ng</dc:creator>
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My friends who are literary agents have told me about the many ways authors try to catch their attention: packages of cookies sent with their manuscripts; queries tucked into oven mitts shaped like sunflowers (of all things).  But this might be the ultimate guerrilla book promotion: faking a kidnapping to promote your book.  [...]]]></description>
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<p>My friends who are literary agents have told me about the many ways authors try to catch their attention: packages of cookies sent with their manuscripts; queries tucked into oven mitts shaped like sunflowers (of all things).  But this might be the ultimate guerrilla book promotion: faking a kidnapping to promote your book.  </p>
<p>Yes. Mark Davis, a thriller writer, did just that.  <a href="http://www2.newsadvance.com/lifestyles/2011/jun/27/lynchburg-writer-fakes-kidnapping-promote-new-book-ar-1136854/">Reports the <em>News Advance</em></a> of Lynchburg, Virginia: </p>
<blockquote><p>His main character, Perno Morris, is a failed novelist who has grown weary (and, perhaps, been pushed over the edge of sanity) by a discouraging series of rejections by publishers. So he finds an uber-successful agent, kidnaps her daughter, and gives her 90 days to get his latest novel in print. [...]</p>
<p>“I went on as many Internet writers’ boards and chat rooms as I could, as Perno Morris, and vented about how unfair the publishing business was,” [Davis] said. “Then I told them I had a plan, and started a countdown to when I would reveal it. That sent a lot of traffic to my website (www.thelastrejection.com), where I had posted the first three chapters of the novel.”</p>
<p>But that was just the beginning. Davis staged and filmed a kidnapping (“I checked with a lawyer first to make sure I wouldn’t get in trouble”) to post on the website, then sent an e-mail to a wide variety of agents. It began: “By the time you receive this, I will have already kidnapped your child.”</p>
<p>“The first phone call I received the next day was at 7:30 in the morning, from an agent,” Davis recalled. “She was yelling at me, saying, ‘Are you crazy?’”</p>
<p>We talked for a little while, though, and I told her: “The most important thing for any novelist these days is to stand out, to attract attention. Based on the fact that you’re calling me this early, I’m assuming I’ve accomplished that goal.”</p></blockquote>
<p>Is this a brilliant idea&#8212;or a cruel one?  As a parent, I can only imagine how traumatized I&#8217;d be if I got an email claiming my child was kidnapped, even in jest.  (Maybe even <em>especially</em> if it were in jest&#8212;or in the service of a promotion.)  </p>
<p>And here&#8217;s the thing: the scheme worked.  Davis landed a book deal.  I&#8217;m not surprised.  </p>
<p>But I wish he hadn&#8217;t.</p>
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		<title>Does YA fiction lead to dark thoughts, or do dark thoughts lead to YA fiction?</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jul 2011 13:00:04 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Celeste Ng</dc:creator>
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Which came first, the moody teen, or the YA fiction that moody teens often gravitate towards?  Linda Holmes of NPR responds to a recent Wall Street Journal editorial that criticized YA fiction for being &#8220;too dark&#8221;:
I&#8217;m more intrigued by the aspirational nature of the quaint but sad idea that teenagers, if you don&#8217;t give [...]]]></description>
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<p>Which came first, the moody teen, or the YA fiction that moody teens often gravitate towards?  Linda Holmes of NPR <a href="http://www.npr.org/blogs/monkeysee/2011/06/06/137005354/seeing-teenagers-as-we-wish-they-were-the-debate-over-ya-fiction">responds</a> to a recent <a href="http://online.wsj.com/article/SB10001424052702303657404576357622592697038.html?mod=WSJ_Books_LS_Books_6"><em>Wall Street Journal</em> editorial</a> that criticized YA fiction for being &#8220;too dark&#8221;:</p>
<blockquote><p>I&#8217;m more intrigued by the aspirational nature of the quaint but sad idea that teenagers, if you don&#8217;t give them The Hunger Games, can be effectively surrounded by images of joy and beauty.</p>
<p>While the WSJ piece refers to the YA fiction view of the world as a funhouse mirror, I fear that what&#8217;s distorted is the vision of being a teenager that suggests kids don&#8217;t know pathologies like suicide or abuse unless they read about them in books.</p>
<p>Do you remember being 15?</p>
<p>For some people, it was a breeze. There are absolutely, positively people who had a very easy time as adolescents, who feel a little guilty about the fact that they didn&#8217;t actually find youth all that difficult, and it&#8217;s unfair to declare their experiences invalid or uninteresting or inauthentic.</p>
<p>But there are plenty — plenty — of people for whom, if they are honest, it was a time of isolation and bafflement and plain old gutting it out until they got older. And even when it wasn&#8217;t miserable, it was often complicated, and a lot of kids who don&#8217;t experience abusive dating relationships or self-harm or eating disorders? They already know somebody who does. Surrounding them with books full of joy and beauty is fine, but confining their reading to those things because we are afraid that they cannot tolerate being exposed to the things they are already so often exposed to does them a terrible disservice. It&#8217;s difficult to say to a teenager, &#8220;We don&#8217;t even let you read about anyone who cuts herself; it&#8217;s that much of a taboo. But by all means, if you&#8217;re cutting yourself, feel free to tell a trusted adult.&#8221;</p>
<p>Honestly, the kids who are reading the scary YA fiction — the dark stuff, the creepy stuff, the adventurous and weird and dirty stuff — are the same kids who, if YA fiction weren&#8217;t dark and creepy sometimes, would just read dark and creepy books for adults.</p></blockquote>
<p>When I was a teen, I remember my mother sitting me down for a serious talk about the music I was listening to: she was concerned that it was &#8220;too depressing,&#8221; that it might be <em>making</em> me angsty.  Okay, she had a point; it was pretty angsty stuff (hey, it was the &#8217;90s, the era of bands like Soundgarden and Nirvana, where the anguished wail became an art form).  But to my mind, the music expressed what I was already feeling.  That was why I listened to it: it spoke to me.  </p>
<p>So do young adults need to be shielded from &#8220;dark&#8221; YA lit?  Or does it help them to express what they&#8217;re already feeling and convince them&#8212;crucially&#8212;that they&#8217;re not alone?  I have to say I&#8217;m with Holmes on this one.</p>
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		<title>The less-great Gatsby</title>
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		<dc:creator>Celeste Ng</dc:creator>
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What happens when you take The Great Gatsby and try to make it more &#8220;accessible&#8221;?
This:
Gatsby believed in the green light, the orgastic future that year by year recedes before us. It eluded us then, but that&#8217;s no matter&#8211;tomorrow we will run faster, stretch out our arms farther. . . . And one fine morning&#8212;-
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<p>What happens when you take The Great Gatsby and try to make it more &#8220;accessible&#8221;?</p>
<p>This:</p>
<blockquote><p>Gatsby believed in the green light, the orgastic future that year by year recedes before us. It eluded us then, but that&#8217;s no matter&#8211;tomorrow we will run faster, stretch out our arms farther. . . . And one fine morning&#8212;-</p>
<p>So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past.</p></blockquote>
<p>becomes this:</p>
<blockquote><p>Gatsby had believed in his dream. He had followed it and nearly made it come true.</p>
<p>Everybody has a dream. And, like Gatsby, we must all follow our dream wherever it takes us.</p>
<p>Some unpleasant people became part of Gatsby&#8217;s dream. But he cannot be blamed for that. Gatsby was a success, in the end, wasn&#8217;t he?</p></blockquote>
<p>At least, that&#8217;s what happened in the &#8220;Intermediate&#8221; <a href="http://www.macmillanreaders.com/">Macmillan Reader</a> edition of <em>The Great Gatsby</em> (<a href="http://www.scribd.com/doc/32506512/The-Great-Gatsby">full text here</a>).  Roger Ebert is <a href="http://blogs.suntimes.com/ebert/2011/07/_did_it_seem_to.html">not a fan</a>, calling it &#8220;an obscenity&#8221;:</p>
<blockquote><p>There is no purpose in &#8220;reading&#8221; The Great Gatsby unless you actually read it. Fitzgerald&#8217;s novel is not about a story. It is about how the story is told. Its poetry, its message, its evocation of Gatsby&#8217;s lost American dream, is expressed in Fitzgerald&#8217;s style&#8211;in the precise words he chose to write what some consider the great American novel. Unless you have read them, you have not read the book at all. You have been imprisoned in an educational system that cheats and insults you by inflicting a barbaric dumbing-down process. You are left with the impression of having read a book, and may never feel you need return for a closer look. [...]</p>
<p>What depresses me is what this Macmillan Reader edition says about our American educational system. Any high school student who cannot read The Great Gatsby in the original cannot read. That student has been sold a bill of goods. We know that teachers at the college level complain that many of their students cannot read and write competently. If this is an example of a book they are assigned, can they be blamed?</p></blockquote>
<p>Now, before you join Ebert in throwing his hissy-fit, I should point out that the Macmillan Readers appear to be <a href="http://www.eltbooks.com/item_list.php?cat=050">geared towards ESL students</a>.  In an interview, the book&#8217;s adaptor, Margaret Tarner (who has written over 40 of these readers since the &#8217;70s), discusses the value of the books in helping students learn proper English:</p>
<blockquote><p>Well it helps them to work by themselves. I mean, the teacher can read them in the class, they can do various things together, but basically reading is an individual accomplishment and it teaches them that they can use the skills they’ve learned in reading their own language – they can take those over into English, and they can read about interesting events, interesting things, widen their knowledge and it is essential that the re-write is written in really good English.</p></blockquote>
<p>Over at <em>The Guardian</em>, writer Alison Flood takes a slightly more measured approach.  She <a href="http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/booksblog/2011/jul/11/great-books-simpler">argues</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>I&#8217;m with Ms BookSlut, Jessa Crispin, who read adaptations as a kid and doesn&#8217;t feel they &#8220;prevented me from reading the real versions once I was ready, nor did it do any brain damage or put me off books. I read them for the story as a kid – murder and intrigue and violence and revolution – and then for the prose later on, when it wasn&#8217;t so off-putting.&#8221; Like Imogen Russell Williams, I read the Ladybird adaptations of the classics and loved them, coming amazed to the proper versions when I grew older, not put off in any way.</p></blockquote>
<p>Where do you stand on this?  Are editions like the Macmillan <em>Gatsby</em> &#8220;obscenities,&#8221; or do they serve a legitimate educational purpose?  Or (gasp) both?</p>
<p><a href="http://www.metafilter.com/105325/Gatsby-without-greatness">Via.</a></p>
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