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		<title>The Mystery of Sherlock Holmes: The Pleasure and Nuisance of an Enduring Character</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lee Thomas</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Why do we love Sherlock Holmes? The famed detective nearly sent his creator off the deep end, and has been the object of countless films, odes, debates, letters, and pilgrimages over the past century. Through the lens of Graham Moore's new novel, <em>The Sherlockian</em>, Lee Thomas muses on the problem of writing a character who outstrips his creator, and what makes us return to Doyle's great detective again and again.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3>The Reader: A Creature of Habit</h3>
<div id="attachment_14559" class="wp-caption alignright" style="width: 290px"><img class="size-medium wp-image-14559" title="sherlock_holmes_the_man_with_the_twisted_lip" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/sherlock_holmes_the_man_with_the_twisted_lip-280x300.jpg" alt="Sherlock Holmes, by Sidney Paget" width="280" height="300" /><p class="wp-caption-text">Sherlock Holmes, by Sidney Paget</p></div>
<p>There are two kinds of readers: those who read, and those who reread. Time’s constraint propels some into the reader camp. You will never have enough hours to read even a fraction of the worthy books that have been written, so why retread known ground?  But I have made my peace with this limit of mortality, and even reread books I know will not change my life. How many times can the end of Agatha Christie’s <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Murder_of_Roger_Ackroyd"><em>The Murder of Roger Ackroyd</em></a> surprise you? Once. I’ve counted. And yet, I’ve returned to it many times, not just for the reading, but also to puzzle out how Christie pulls off her magic. I reread for one simple reason: pleasure.</p>
<p><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-14568" title="AStudyInScarlet_Beeton_Annual" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/AStudyInScarlet_Beeton_Annual-192x300.jpg" alt="AStudyInScarlet_Beeton_Annual" width="160" height="250" />I’ve returned to few stories as often as Sir Arthur Conan Doyle’s adventures of Sherlock Holmes. Nearly 60 stories and four novels comprise Doyle’s great body of work with the detective, and devotees of Holmes have existed since <a href="http://www.literature.org/authors/doyle-arthur-conan/study-in-scarlet/index.html"><em>A Study in Scarlet</em></a> first appeared in <em>Beeton’s Christmas Annual</em> in 1887. Doyle was 27-years-old at the time. We owe the community of Southsea our eternal thanks that Doyle’s medical practice was not more successful, leaving him time, as he sat waiting for patients, to try his hand at fiction.</p>
<p>Numerous societies – including various iterations of <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baker_Street_Irregulars">The Baker Street Irregulars</a> – have sprung up surrounding Holmes. Many mystery fans cut their teeth on Doyle’s stories. The name “Sherlock” seems all but retired like an old hockey jersey. How many parents would saddle their child with that recognizable a namesake? As a compulsive rereader of the stories, I ask myself: Why? What about Holmes draws us, more than 100 years on, not only to read the works, but also to love the character? How is it we <em>know</em> Sherlock Holmes?</p>
<h3><em>The Sherlockian</em>: A Love Letter</h3>
<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-14595" title="sherlockian" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/sherlockian_custom.jpg" alt="sherlockian" width="167" height="250" />I view works linked to established characters with trepidation. But frankly, I can’t help myself either. There is that feeling of wanting more, wanting there to be another, undiscovered, manuscript. We know, in some corner of our mind, that Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson continue living and acting – albeit in Victorian England, which for them is alive and well. Graham Moore poses the questions surrounding reader familiarity, iconic character, and authorial autonomy in his novel, <a href="http://www.twelvebooks.com/books/sherlockian.asp?page=desc"><em>The Sherlockian</em></a>, out this month from Twelve.</p>
<p>Among <em>The Sherlockian</em>’s many pleasures are not one, but two, traditional mysteries. The first begins at a modern Sherlockian conference at the Algonquin Hotel in New York when one of the members turns up strangled with a shoelace, and the hunt for his killer, and a missing volume of Doyle’s diary, ensues. The second follows Arthur Conan Doyle and an incredibly charming Bram Stoker through the final days of Victorian London, on a tangled adventure that begins with a package bomb. The mysteries alone are entertaining, but what Moore managed to pull off is the omnipresent ghost of Holmes – who hovers above Doyle and Stoker, the Sherlockians, and the reader.</p>
<p>Moore’s Doyle thread begins with Holmes’ demise at Reichenbach Falls. The actual story appeared in <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Strand_Magazine"><em>The Strand</em></a> (which published most of the Holmes stories) in 1893. Moore captures Doyle’s elation at being free of the character that had outstripped him in every sense. Here is Doyle ranting to his friend, Dracula creator Bram Stoker about Holmes:</p>
<blockquote><p>“I hate him more than anyone! If I had not killed him, he certainly would have killed me. And now these … these people act as if the man were real, as if I’d murdered their father, their wife.” Arthur spoke faster, the anger welling up inside him. He began ranting to Bram about the unfairness of it all, about how Holmes had distracted the public from better things, about the myriad ways in which, once loosed, the creation begins to dwarf its creator.</p></blockquote>
<p>This theme – the public outrage at Doyle’s decision to free himself of Holmes – continues throughout the book. Of course a story, once published, becomes the property of the readers, more than the writer. Right? This may be one of the stickiest aspects of putting a book out into the world. Often, a writer has little idea of the reader’s reaction – good or bad – to a book. But every once in a while, a character or book takes on a life of its own. As a writer, I always want to come to the defense of my choices, my reservations or inclusions, but rarely do I have that luxury. The reader almost never welcomes the intrusion; the work has become as much hers as it is mine.</p>
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<p>Moore, too, must confront and acknowledge our knowledge of – and attachment to – Holmes. He begins by intertwining Doyle and Bram’s caper, which occurs during the nine-year <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sherlock_Holmes#The_Great_Hiatus">Great Hiatus</a>, into the modern mystery featuring the Baker Street Irregular Harold White.  If Holmes is sharp angles, imperious intellect, and endearing eccentricities, Harold is soft, hapless, and self-doubting, though fairly eccentric. Harold does manage to turn his lifelong fascination with Holmes into good detective work. Moore uses Harold and Doyle, both in the role of detective, to reveal the impossible standard Holmes has set. In other words, Harold White plays mortal to Sherlock’s “most interesting man in the world” – to borrow a phrase. The parts featuring Doyle and Stoker felt more compelling, because this reader has a vested interest in the London of Holmes; the comfort of the gaslight and hansom cab cannot be discounted.</p>
<h3>Familiarity Breeds … Devotion</h3>
<p>As a reader, it’s my personal investment in Holmes – the why of it – I find so fascinating. Unlike many great fictional detectives, we know exactly how Holmes looked: the quintessential English gentleman, often decked out in smoking jacket, angular of feature, tall, lean, refined. Sidney Paget’s wonderful illustrations accompanied the original stories in <em>The Strand</em>, so the original readers had Holmes seared on their imaginations too. Part of this is why the film versions of Holmes – with the possible exception of Robert Downey Jr. – hew so close to the type, sinewy and sharp, fastidious, yet loose-limbed.</p>
<p><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-14603" title="the Strand" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/the-Strand-215x300.jpg" alt="the Strand" width="215" height="300" />Doyle had a long time to build the character in our collective imagination. He published the Holmes stories over a forty-year period, from 1887 – 1927, with the aforementioned hiatus between “The Final Problem” and the story where Holmes returns, “The Mystery of the Empty House.” Over the course of those decades, Doyle built up a detective who is both a creature of habit, and capricious in the way of great characters – in life and in literature. Holmes’ habits often revealed his nature, and became shorthand for his state of mind. In “<a href="http://ignisart.com/camdenhouse/canon/copp.htm">The Copper Beeches</a>,” Doyle shows Holmes “taking up a glowing cinder with the tongs, and lighting with it the long cherrywood pipe which was wont to replace his clay when he was in a disputatious rather than a meditative mood.” With a few brief strokes, Doyle conveys so much. We view Holmes as an intimate, for in many ways the narrator of the stories, his friend and confidant Watson, is our surrogate.</p>
<p>We know, for example, that Holmes cultivates knowledge the way Hercule Poirot grows vegetable marrows. He’s written a monograph on tobacco, conducts chemical experiments in his rooms, plays the violin well, dabbles in phrenology, the list goes on. In some of the stories, Holmes uses cocaine, though in later tales it’s suggested he’s stopped the habit. We know his address: 221B Baker Street. How many other literary characters can we place so exactly on the map? I can hardly remember my own addresses from childhood.</p>
<p><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-14605" title="the_maltese_falcon" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/the_maltese_falcon.jpg" alt="the_maltese_falcon" width="150" height="229" />This depth of knowledge, and inspired complexity on Doyle’s part, provides many enjoyable passages in the Harold White strand of <em>The Sherlockian</em>. As Harold looks around at his fellow Irregulars at the convention, he realizes, “They’d all read the same books. They all knew the same stories by heart – Christie, Chandler, Hammett, on and on, the list would fill pages.” It’s the same with every gathering of enthusiasts, be it Comic-Con or a meeting of oenophiles: shared knowledge breeds debate, fond recollection, splinter factions, even love – as evidenced later in <em>The Sherlockian</em>. For a serial character to last requires alchemy, and Holmes has always seemed the perfect mean of brooding and benevolent, fiery and cold, both what we wish him to be and wholly his own man.</p>
<p>As writers, too much familiarity can become a heavy burden. It’s no wonder Doyle rebelled against the exploits of Holmes, he felt fettered by the form and the character. But as readers, the investment in a character deepens as our knowledge of him grows – in a similar way to the shared experience in a family. We all know the same stories; we tell the same anecdotes again and again; we laugh about the past; we debate what actually happened from the haze of our memory. Yet Doyle keeps Holmes fresh and alive precisely because he is unpredictable. Just because he’s turned the burglar over to Scotland Yard three times before, doesn’t mean he won’t decide on his own course of justice in the story we’re reading. He’s capricious toward Watson, sometimes bordering cruel, sometimes with the fondness of a grandmother. We both intimately know Holmes, and are kept on the edge of our seats, guessing what he’ll do next. Doyle understood pure familiarity creates boredom for writer and reader, and he built complexity into a man as familiar as an old slipper.</p>
<h3>Misdirection: The game is afoot!</h3>
<p>Moore gets it right by making <em>The Sherlockian</em> not just a meditation on the nature of iconic characters, and fanatical devotees of those fictional heroes, but an honest mystery. The Holmes stories deliver lessons in English class and history of late-Victorian England, but the reader hardly realizes the accumulation of this knowledge because, well, who <em>did</em> take the Bruce-Partington plans, and how <em>did</em> Silver Blaze go missing? Some of the most satisfying passages in <em>The Sherlockian</em> come as Doyle frets over his own case and marvels at his audience’s patience:</p>
<blockquote><p>Was this how it felt to be one of his readers? To be lost in the middle of the story, without the slightest of notions as to where you were headed? Arthur felt horrible. He felt as if he had no control of events as they unfolded. What trust his readers must put in him, to submit themselves to this unnerving confusion, while holding out hope that Arthur would see them through to a satisfying conclusions. But what if there were no solution on the final page?</p></blockquote>
<p>Of course, we <em>do</em> get satisfaction at the end of each of Watson’s records, even if it’s the horror of watching Holmes go over the falls. Satisfaction has become one of the great conventions of the mystery genre.</p>
<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-14609" title="boot from bog in baskervilles_sidney paget" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/boot-from-bog-in-baskervilles_sidney-paget.jpg" alt="boot from bog in baskervilles_sidney paget" width="200" height="263" />With Holmes, Doyle mastered the storyteller’s art of misdirection. We have the pieces to solve the mystery, we just don’t recognize the important ones in time. I find Doyle <em>usually</em> plays fair, more so than Christie, who I also adore reading, who sometimes pushes misdirection so far the solution makes me scoff at her sleights-of-hand. One of my favorites involved a piece of sticky candy and a spilled purse. Our gaze falls everywhere but where it should. Doyle knew how to write with just enough light and shadow to keep us guessing in the dark until the end.</p>
<p><em>The Sherlockian</em> contains this traditional misdirection, but like the original stories, the greater trick is making the mystery secondary to the characters, even as we believe the reverse. The Holmes stories became not about the mysteries – so emphasized by the writing – but rather Holmes himself. We thought we devoured the capers for the prize at the end, but the real reward was Sherlock Holmes. He is what I remember, who I want to spend time following. Moore’s version of Doyle lights upon this halfway through the book:</p>
<blockquote><p>To discover something for oneself was exciting, of course, but to then explain it to a mystified audience … Well, a detective needs an audience. Arthur felt he understood his old Holmes more and more with every passing day.</p></blockquote>
<p>As a member of that mystified crowd, I can say: the reason I care to know the answer to the mystery is because Holmes provides extremely good company.</p>
<p><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-14611" title="strand-cover" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/strand-cover.jpg" alt="strand-cover" width="167" height="240" />The real trick of misdirection is not forcing our attention on the valet, or the whistle in the night, but making the mystery seem the main object of the stories. It’s not. Sherlock Holmes himself, our love affair with the detective and his well-meaning partner Watson, is the sleight-of-hand. I’m not sure that Doyle realized the extent to which this was true – thus the attempt to kill off Holmes in 1893, thus the resentment. Doyle tired of the formula, tired of Holmes’ genius, wished to explore other avenues as a writer. But by then it was too late, he’d cast all of London in the thrall of the detective. The beast had to be fed. The lovers demanded the return of the beloved. Of course, he could have denied his angry readership more stories – but thank goodness he caved, it matters not whether to money, endless needling or a change of heart: we got Holmes back.</p>
<h3>The Writer’s Wishes and Immortality</h3>
<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-14613" title="holmes-violin" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/holmes-violin.jpg" alt="holmes-violin" width="180" height="182" />Don’t we dream of creating an immortal character, one who will outlive our own fame as the author? Few have succeeded to the level of Arthur Conan Doyle’s Sherlock Holmes. Graham Moore chooses wisely to write about Holmes the immortal in a way that lets the character breathe. In<em> The Sherlockian</em>, we have a meditation on our own act of reading the stories through two wonderful guides: White and Doyle. The mystery is a good one – I was successfully deceived on several counts – but the real thrill of the novel is thinking about an artist creating something beyond his control. It’s <em>Frankenstein</em> set in late-Victorian London. We feel sympathy for Doyle, even as we hungrily read back over his Holmes stories and realize that sometimes the mortal man must take a backseat to the god he has made.</p>
<p>Graham Moore realized that for Sherlockians the world over, the detective is best left untouched. But as fellow readers, can we not sympathize with the writer’s impulse to pay homage to that indelible character that feels as much a part of our own lives as any flesh-and-blood friend? As writers, we can only stand back in wonder at the pure devotion a character can still conjure. May one of us be lucky enough to discover the peculiar curse of creating a character so resonant he steps from the page, and commands us to sit straight, take note, and, “For goodness sake, Watson, try to keep up.”</p>
<p>As Harold White examines a scene of crime early in <em>The Sherlockian</em>, he unearths a clue that sets his heart racing.</p>
<blockquote><p>There is an undeniable exhilaration in the moment of even the smallest discovery – the house keys unearthed in yesterday’s pants; the mysterious recurring tinkle you hear as you fail to fall asleep explained, upon examination, by the dripping bathroom faucet; the digits of your mother’s old telephone number recalled, magically, from some moss-covered Precambrian mental arcadia. The human mind trills at few things so much as making connections. Discovering. Solving.</p></blockquote>
<p>But the connections we make solving the mysteries alongside Holmes and Watson come second to the discovery of the Sherlock Holmes. The detective surprises, confounds, worries, teases and delights Watson, and, by proxy, us. The tales have long seemed as much Romance as Mystery to me, Holmes woos me more than any Austen dandy or Wharton gentleman. The mysteries have their answer on the page, it’s the love affair that we may never solve, and so we return to the old familiar stories, again and again.</p>
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<h2>Further links and resources:</h2>
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<li><a href="http://www.telegraph.co.uk/culture/books/8206642/Sherlock-Holmes-fans-stage-last-ditch-attempt-to-save-Conan-Doyles-home.html">Read a <em>Telegraph</em> article</a> about Sherlock Holmes fans in England are fighting to save the home in Surrey where Sir Arthur Conan Doyle wrote many of his famous novels.</li>
<li>Buy a copy of Moore&#8217;s <a href="http://www.powells.com/biblio/2-9780446572590-0"><em>The Sherlockian</em></a> &#8211; or even <a href="http://www.powells.com/biblio/17-9780890090572-7"><em>The Original Illustrated Sherlock Holmes</em></a> &#8211; from Powell&#8217;s Books.</li>
<li>If you live on the West Coast, you can still catch Graham Moore&#8217;s book tour in January, for full details on his stops in San Diego and Los Angeles, visit the <a href="http://www.twelvebooks.com/authors/graham_moore.asp?page=tour">Twelve website</a>.</li>
<li>Watch the book trailer for Graham Moore&#8217;s <em>The Sherlockian</em>.</li>
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		<title>Every Line Matters: In Memory of Barry Hannah (1942-2010)</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeremiah Chamberlin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[This morning I woke to hear the sad news that Barry Hannah had died. He was 67, and the apparent cause was a heart attack, according to the <em>Jackson Free Press</em>. Barry had had several bouts with cancer over the last ten years, yet I was still shocked to hear that he was gone. I guess I'd come to think of him as oddly invincible. ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>Editor&#8217;s Note:</strong> This essay was originally posted on our blog on March 2. However, in an effort to celebrate Barry Hannah&#8217;s life and work and craft, we have decided to republish it in an expanded form. Thank you.</p>
<p><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-7146" title="barryhannah" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/barryhannah.jpg" alt="barryhannah" width="175" height="251" />This morning I woke to hear the sad news that Barry Hannah had died. He was 67, and the apparent cause was a heart attack, according to the <a href="http://www.jacksonfreepress.com/index.php/site/comments/breaking_writer_barry_hannah_dies_of_heart_attack_030110/">Jackson Free Press</a>. Barry had had several bouts with cancer over the last ten years, yet I was still shocked to hear that he was gone. I guess I&#8217;d come to think of him as oddly invincible.</p>
<p>Maybe it&#8217;s also because Barry&#8217;s prose felt like it was carved out of stone. Not weighty, but permanent. With a hint of the divine. That crazy Old Testament kind of divinity that&#8217;s equal parts kindness and cruelty, lust and humor. Especially humor. Who else could open a collection of stories as Barry did his 1978 masterpiece, <em>Airships, </em>with a passage like this:</p>
<blockquote><p>When I am run down and flocked around by the world, I go  down to Farte Cove off the Yazoo River and take my beer to the end of  the pier where the old liars are still snapping and wheezing at one  another. The line-up is always different, because they’re always dying  out or succumbing to constipation, etc., whereupon they go back to the  cabins and wait for a good day when they can come out and lie again,  leaning on the rail with coats full of bran cookies. The son of the man  the cove was named for is often out there. He pronounces his name Far<em>tay</em>,  with a great French stress on the last syllable. Otherwise you might  laugh at his history or ignore it in favor of the name as it’s spelled  on the sign.</p>
<p>I’m glad it’s not my name.</p></blockquote>
<p>For many young writers, this was our first encounter with Barry&#8217;s work. His voice hooked you deep. I was in college when this book was pressed upon me and my now brother-in-law, Dean Bakopoulos, by Elwood Reid. This was the late 1990s. Dean and I were undergrads at the University of Michigan, both eager to be writers but still sorting out exactly how to go about the task. Elwood, who was finishing his MFA at the time, took us under his wing to show us the way. For Elwood, who&#8217;d once been a college football player, that meant work. Lots of work. And by &#8220;work&#8221; I mean reading. Barry Hannah. Larry Brown. Rick Bass. Amy Hempl. Mary Gaitskill. The collections piled up.</p>
<p>But there was something about Barry&#8217;s work that stood out. An urgency in the prose that punctured your heart. &#8220;Water Liars&#8221; is a great story, but when I hit the second one in the collection, &#8220;Love Too Long,&#8221; I was gone.</p>
<blockquote><p>My head&#8217;s burning off and I got a heart about to bust out of my ribs. All I can do is move from chair to chair with my cigarette. I wear shades. I can&#8217;t read a magazine. Some days I take my binoculars and look out in the air. They laid me off. I can&#8217;t find work. My wife&#8217;s got a job and she takes flying lessons. When she comes over the house in her airplane, I&#8217;m afraid she&#8217;ll screw up and crash.</p></blockquote>
<p>For a college kid, Barry bored down through the mantle to the molten core of what it meant to feel. He still does. Typing his words you can feel the anguish and energy. Further down this page, the narrator, nearly beside himself, writes, &#8220;I want to sleep in her uterus with my foot hanging out.&#8221; It&#8217;s an image that makes you wince, but it&#8217;s also oddly tender. What it is is honest.</p>
<p>I experienced both sides of Barry&#8217;s honesty when I was a student of his in 2003 at the Sewanee Writers&#8217; Conference. The day of my workshop, we moved around the table in usual fashion&#8211;what&#8217;s working, what isn&#8217;t. <a href="http://al.odu.edu/english/faculty/jpeery.shtml">Janet Peery</a> was co-teaching the session, and among the group were writers such as <a href="http://www.benjaminpercy.com/">Ben Percy</a>, <a href="http://www.justlikebeauty.com/">Lisa Lerner</a>, <a href="http://www.land-grantcollegereview.com/authors.php?id=1">Dave Koch</a>, <a href="http://www.blackbird.vcu.edu/v7n2/fiction/anderson_f/index.htm">Forrest Anderson</a>, <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Narcissus-Ascending-Novel-Karen-McKinnon/dp/0312312180">Karen McKinnon</a>, and <a href="http://www.johnstruloeff.com/index.html">John Struloeff</a>. I was giddy to be in the room with one of my literary heroes. And while the others were offering feedback on my writing, I stole the occasional glance to see how Barry was reacting. Most of the time he spent flipping fairly idly through my pages. So perhaps I shouldn&#8217;t have been surprised when, upon his turn to speak, he began gutting the opening paragraph of the prologue to the novel I&#8217;d been working on. Sentence by sentence, word by word, he worked like a butcher, cutting back the fat. Let&#8217;s just say that there wasn&#8217;t much meat left when he got down to the bone. Or, rather, he showed me that there hadn&#8217;t been much muscle to begin with. Would it be too much to say I felt eviscerated along with my work?</p>
<p>Yet it wasn&#8217;t cruel. It was honest. And when the furnace of my face cooled I saw that he was mostly right.</p>
<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-7173" title="9780802133885" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/97808021338852.jpg" alt="9780802133885" width="211" height="324" />But I didn&#8217;t want my teacher and literary icon to have this impression of my work (I swear, the rest was better). So, later that night, during the evening cocktail hour, I slipped him one of my stories, one which I&#8217;d been carrying around for the better part of an hour rolled up in my fist, wrinkled and creased. And when I finally got the nerve to give it to him, I tried hard to assure him that this wasn&#8217;t extra work. Nothing I was looking for feedback on. Nothing he even had to read during the conference. Just, well, something I wanted him to have. And I&#8217;m sure I must have said something inane like, &#8220;I hope you enjoy it.&#8221; As if it were some sort of gift. Walking away, I was certain that I had made things worse.</p>
<p>And the next morning, when Barry found me at breakfast, I was more than sure of my mistake. &#8220;Here, kid,&#8221; he said, handing the story back to me across the table. Without another word, he walked off. Cut to blistered cheeks again. In front of an entire table of your peers, Barry Hannah has just returned the story you gave him the evening before, the story meant to redeem you. &#8220;Thanks, but no thanks,&#8221; is what you read in this gesture. And in that moment you imagine escaping back to Michigan several days from now&#8211;it&#8217;s a nice, long trip from Tennessee, one that will give you plenty of highway to replay this moment over and over and over.</p>
<p>Yet when I unrolled my story, he&#8217;d scrawled this across the top in loopy script: &#8220;I enjoyed greatly. I&#8217;m nominating it for <em>Best New American Voices</em>.&#8221; Simple. Generous. An unasked for kindness. And I realized that it wasn&#8217;t about you in that classroom; for Barry it was about the work.</p>
<p>At the end of his fantastic <a href="http://tinhousebooks.com/blog/?p=724">interview</a> with Barry in <em>Tin House</em> last year, Tom Franklin asked the author how his teaching has changed over the years. Here is Barry&#8217;s response:</p>
<blockquote><p>It&#8217;s gotten a lot simpler. The things that I do well in my own work, I didn&#8217;t ever think about, because I&#8217;d been trained on good storytelling and helped by a few good teachers. But outside of beginning, middle, and end and &#8220;thrill us,&#8221; what is there to teach? There&#8217;s no theory, there&#8217;s nothing that guarantees publication. I&#8217;ve never been interested in intellectual experiments. I prefer to thrill people in their guts rather than in their heads. With some of the MFA writing I read now, I wonder, &#8220;My God, didn&#8217;t anybody get it across that you&#8217;ve got to entertain?&#8221; You&#8217;re fortunate if what entertains you entertains the crowd also.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s impossible for me to behave as if I were thirty-five when I was writing <em>Airships</em>&#8211;it&#8217;s impossible. And I must say you don&#8217;t necessarily gain a lot by age; you sometimes are in danger of becoming the old hack plagiarizing his own former work. That&#8217;s probably why the old often bore people, they just say the same damn things over and over, and they just deal in truisms. That&#8217;s the mass of America, one truism after another. For instance, the word motherfucker is a truism now. It&#8217;s just empty. It used to be an exciting word because it&#8217;s the worst thing you can imagine, you know? But now it&#8217;s just a weak flat noun.</p>
<p>It may be just my time of life, but I&#8217;ve been teaching better, I hope. My essays have gotten better. But what I want is what I had in <em>Airships</em> and <em>High Lonesome</em> and <em>Bats Out of Hell</em> and <em>Captain Maximus</em>: joy. Joy, just joy, just jump in there because you&#8217;re onto it. You&#8217;ve gotta write it. You feel it deep in the pit of your stomach.</p></blockquote>
<p>Thank you, Barry.</p>
<p><strong>From the <a href="http://sewaneewriters.org/">Sewanee Writers&#8217; Conference</a> on March 2, 2010:</strong></p>
<p><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-7161" title="Hannah-160x187" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/Hannah-160x187.jpg" alt="Hannah-160x187" width="160" height="187" />We are saddened to hear that Barry Hannah, a great friend of the  conference, passed away on Monday, March 1.  Barry was a member of the  fiction faculty at Sewanee in 1999, 2000-2003, and 2006.  He visited the  conference to read in 2004, 2005, 2007, and he was scheduled to read at  this summer&#8217;s conference.</p>
<p>One of the finest writers in American letters, Barry Hannah published  eight novels—<cite>Geronimo Rex</cite> (Alfred A. Knopf, 1972—winner of  the William Faulkner Prize), <cite>Nightwatchmen</cite> (Viking, 1974), <cite>Ray</cite>,  <cite>The Tennis Handsome</cite> (Alfred A. Knopf, 1981, 1983,  respectively), <cite>Boomerang</cite>, <cite>Never Die</cite> (University Press of Mississippi, 1986 and 1990), <cite>Hey Jack!</cite> (Dutton, 1992), and <cite>Yonder Stands Your Orphan</cite> (Grove/Atlantic, 2001). His story collections are <cite>Airships</cite>,  <cite>Captain Maximus</cite> (Alfred A. Knopf, 1978 and 1985), <cite>Bats  out of Hell</cite>, and <cite>High Lonesome</cite> (Grove/Atlantic,  1993 and 1996).</p>
<p>Barry&#8217;s readings at Sewanee were always the highlight of the  conference, and his openness with all participants spoke to his  generosity.  We will miss him greatly.</p>
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<li> You can read the <cite>New York Times</cite> obituary <a href="http://www.nytimes.com/aponline/2010/03/02/books/AP-US-Obit-Hannah.html?_r=1&amp;ref=obituaries">here</a>.</li>
<li> <cite>The Mississippi Review</cite> has an <a href="http://www.mississippireview.com/1997/interv2.html">interview</a> with Hannah from 1996.</li>
<li> At <a href="http://wiredforbooks.org/barryhannah/">Wired for Books</a>,  you can hear Hannah read from his stories &#8220;Water Liars&#8221; and &#8220;That&#8217;s  True&#8221;.</li>
<li> <a href="http://oxfordconferenceforthebook.com/">The Oxford Conference  for the Book</a>, which begins March 4th, is dedicated to Barry Hannah.   Writers such as Tom Franklin and Amy Hempel will discuss his life and  work.</li>
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<p>Like many writers who&#8217;ve been inspired and influenced by Barry&#8217;s  work, I&#8217;ve spent much of the past few days pulling his books off the  shelf to reread favorite stories and passages. I&#8217;ve been carrying my  copy of <em>Airships </em>around with me since Tuesday, like some sort  of totem. It&#8217;s inscribed with a simple message from Barry: &#8220;Yours to  hell and back.&#8221; Part promise, part confession. It&#8217;s a simple line, but  it matters. And it reminded me how much Barry cared about the line. Particularly those clean, simple, honest lines: &#8220;I&#8217;m going to die  from love.&#8221; Who else could end a story like that and truly mean it?</p>
<p>I think it was the honesty of Barry&#8217;s work that drew so many of us to him. And I also think the many memorials and tributes that  have poured out since news of his death are a testament to not only his great talent, but also his generosity and his kindness. He had damn high standards, but as long as you were willing to be true to the art you were good in his book.</p>
<p>And so to celebrate Barry&#8217;s influence, and also with the hopes of bringing new readers to his fiction, we decided to republish this essay as a feature. We also wanted to take this opportunity to recognize some of the sites that have been paying homage to Hannah this week, as well as those publications that have supported his work for years. Thank you.</p>
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<li><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-7217" title="BHannahOA2PG" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/BHannahOA2PG.jpg" alt="BHannahOA2PG" width="218" height="253" /><strong>Matthew Simmons </strong>from <em>HTML Giant</em> was one of the first to bring news of Barry Hannah&#8217;s passing, and he has a wonderful <a href="http://htmlgiant.com/author-news/barry/">tribute</a> to the author that unfolded as we learned of his death.</li>
<li><strong>Alec Niedenthal </strong>subsequently put together a collection of <a href="http://htmlgiant.com/author-spotlight/there-are-dry-tiny-horses-running-in-my-veins-mourning-barry-hannah/">remembrances</a> for the same site<strong> </strong> entitled &#8220;There are Dry Tiny Horses Running in My Veins: Mourning Barry Hannah,&#8221; which includes not only his recollections and those of Michael Bible and Lincoln Michel, but also a selection from this post of mine. Many thanks for that.</li>
<li><strong>Lincoln Michel</strong> has a great <a href="http://thefastertimes.com/fiction/2010/03/03/barry-hannah-remembrance-round-up/">round-up</a> of links to work by and about Hananh on <em>The Faster Times</em>.</li>
<li>One of those pieces that stands out is a wonderful <a href="http://www.vanityfair.com/online/daily/2010/03/writers-remember-barry-hannah.html">compilation</a> in <em>Vanity Fai</em>r by <strong>Claire Howorth</strong>, which includes remembrances of Hannah by such writers as Richard Ford, Jim Harrison, Amy Hempl, Matt Wieland, and Wells Tower.</li>
<li>There&#8217;s also a great <a href="http://therumpus.net/2010/03/barely-discernible-notes-on-barry-hanna/">essay</a> on <em>The Rumpus</em> by <strong>A.N. Devers</strong> about Hannah, grieving, and the memory of our teachers.</li>
<li>And a wonderful <a href="http://wilsonkevin.blogspot.com/2010/03/barry-hannah.html">anecdote</a> about idolizing Hannah from <strong>Kevin Wilson</strong> on his blog.</li>
<li>Just a few weeks ago <strong>Elwood Reid </strong>wrote a brief <a href="http://threeguysonebook.com/when-we-fell-in-love-elwood-reid">review</a> for <em>Three Guys One Book</em> about how the collection <em>Airships</em> affected him when he read it for the first time. He writes, &#8220;<em>Airships</em> didn’t change my life, it rewired my idea of the  sentence and what a short story could and should do.&#8221;</li>
<li>To hear Hannah talk about his work and the writing life, you can read <strong>Tom Franklin&#8217;s</strong> 2009 <em>Tin House</em> <a href="http://tinhousebooks.com/blog/?p=724">interview</a>, or <strong>Mark Smirnoff&#8217;s</strong> 2001 <a href="http://www.oxfordamerican.org/articles/2010/mar/02/barry-hannah-19422010/">interview</a> from <em>The Oxford American</em>.</li>
<li><strong>Wells Tower </strong>also has a beautiful <a href="http://gardenandgun.com/article/barry-hannahs-long-shadow?page=0%2C0">portrait</a> of Hannah and the trip he took with the author to visit Larry Brown&#8217;s  grave in 2008 for <em>Garden &amp; Gun</em>.</li>
<li>For more on Hannah&#8217;s writing style itself, read &#8220;Among Mutinous Helium Bursts Around Saturn: Barry Hannah&#8217;s dangerous  syntax,&#8221; an <a href="http://www.oxfordamerican.org/articles/2009/sep/01/among-mutinous-helium-bursts-around-saturn-barry-h/">essay</a> by <strong>Jamie Quatro</strong>, which appeared in the September 2009 Southern  Lit issue of <em>The Oxford American.</em></li>
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<li>And last, but certainly not least, here is <a href="http://gardenandgun.com/waterliars">&#8220;Water Liars,&#8221;</a> the  opening story from <strong>Barry Hannah&#8217;s</strong> 1978 collection, <em>Airships (</em>reprinted  with permission from Grove Press on the <em>Garden &amp; Gun </em>website).</li>
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<div><strong><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-7264" title="SB4_Evening" src="http://fictionwritersreview.com/wp-content/uploads/SB4_Evening4-225x300.jpg" alt="SB4_Evening" width="225" height="300" />Of Special Note:</strong> Hannah&#8217;s influence on American Letters will be celebrated in Oxford at  the 17th Annual <a href="http://oxfordconferenceforthebook.com/">Oxford Conference for the Book</a>, which begins March 4. The conference had been dedicated to the author&#8217;s work and life, and will take place as planned. Scheduled to speak are such writers as Beth Ann Fennelly, Tom Franklin, John Grisham, Hendrik Hertzberg, Mark Jarman, JoAnne Prichard Morris, Mark Richard, Cynthia Shearer, Wells Tower, and Steve Yates. Here is <strong>Richard Howorth&#8217;s</strong> <a href="http://www.squarebooks.com/index.php?option=com_content&amp;view=article&amp;id=451:world-of-letters-oxford-mourn-loss-of-barry-hannah-&amp;catid=86:barry-hannah">tribute</a>, which had originally been written to be delivered at the conference. Howorth is the owner of Square Books in Oxford, Mississippi, and a long-time friend of Hannah.</div>
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